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Timed Writing: Techniques for Success
Source: The College Board (http://www.collegeboard.com/student/plan/boost-your-skills/50269.html)
When you think of essay writing, you probably see yourself sitting at the computer with time on your side. In reality, however, there are many situations in which the writer is on the clock.
Everyone knows that an essay needs a clear thesis, supporting paragraphs with specific examples, and language that is exact and effective. What everyone doesn't know, though, is how to include all those elements when time is short.
Read on to learn about the steps you can take to improve your writing when you face timed essays.
1. Reading and Understanding the Question or Prompt
The most common, and worst, mistake that you can make when writing with a time limit is to misread the question or prompt. You may feel that you need to rush and get started, but once you get your assignment, take a deep breath and slow down. To craft an accurate response, you must know where to begin, as well as where you're going.
An effective strategy is to underline, circle, or otherwise highlight the key words in the question. Here are explanations of the words and phrases you'll find in instructions for timed essays:
Agree or disagree: Take a position and stick with it throughout the entire essay. Don't change your mind or try to argue both sides.
Challenge: This term is a synonym for disagree.
Compare: Outline the similarities between the two sides.
Contrast: Outline the differences between the two sides.
Compare and contrast: The expectation is that you do both, not choose one.
Debate: You can argue both sides of the topic. Ultimately, though, develop a specific position with one side coming out stronger.
Define: Outline the topic's main points.
Illustrate: Make a point and use specific examples to support it.
Identify parallels: This phrase is a synonym for compare.
Discuss or explain: These terms are vague. You may be expected to complete any of the tasks listed above. Look for other key words in the question to guide your response.
Develop your point of view: This is what you'll be asked to do on the SAT® essay. You may use any of the strategies listed above to support a thesis that takes a position on the topic.
2. Planning
Again, you may feel the urge to rush ahead and put pencil to paper. Yet if you do so without devising some sort of design, you are almost certain to lose focus and end up with a jumble of words that leads nowhere.
Take another deep breath and invest two or three minutes in planning. Writers generally have their own personal strategies, but if you haven't found one that works for you, consider these techniques:
Outlining: This format is helpful for people who like clear structure.
Brainstorming: Put the topic or thesis in the center of the page and then write supporting examples that branch out from the main point.
Listing: Similar to outlining but with a bit less structure, this method lets you get your ideas down easily.
Weighing pros and cons or similarities and differences: When you're asked to debate or to compare and contrast two ideas, write a heading for each assertion, draw a line between the headings, and list the main points side by side.
3. Writing
Once you've read the question carefully and have spent a few minutes planning, you're ready to begin. You need to pace yourself because you'll have only a few minutes per paragraph. If you constantly find yourself rushing to finish, consider these tips.
Introduction: A creative start draws readers in and makes them want to keep going. However, unless a great opening dawns on you immediately, skip it, leave space to go back later (if you have time), and move directly to your thesis. You can't get back the time you spend stressing out over your opening.
Body: For each body paragraph, include a topic sentence that gives a specific example to prove your thesis statement and a body that elaborates upon or explains this example. Keep in mind that, unless the directions tell you otherwise, you don't have to come up with three examples. Supporting your thesis with one or two well-developed examples can work better than including three that are short or unfinished.
Conclusion: Try to come up with a conclusion that does more than merely restate your thesis and main points. It should be clear to the reader that you’re wrapping things up, but your conclusion should be brief. Usually a strong sentence or two will do it.
4. Editing and Proofreading
Try to leave a few minutes to read through your entire essay. Look out for any glaring structural or content errors. Then, if time permits, check for spelling and grammatical mistakes. Lastly, if you have time, revisit your introduction to see if you can improve your opening.
Remember, you can write a solid, effective essay in a short time—if you use those precious minutes wisely.

Tammy
Tammy is my pet cat. It is a female. It is very special. It is snowy white with a few grey spots with
stripes all over and one on its head. Its eyes are lime-green, dazzling in the day and glowing at night. It
walks with pride everywhere because of who she is. It always begs to go and play outside. We usually let
it because it knows how to come back.
Tammy hates all types of food except for cat food. It even hates beef and chicken. It hates my
baby sister. But it is obvious that she hates her because of jealousy. It used to hit my sister without
anyone looking. But my sister once hit her back and it stopped hitting her or anyone else ever since. No
cat likes being pulled by the tail, and if anyone does that to Tammy, it would turn mad.
Tammy likes sleeping in front of the house. And when we open the door, we see it coming
straight back in. It likes sitting on our laps while we are watching TV. It likes people. It was never afraid
of them, even before we met it. It also likes sleeping in places like small spaced areas, places that
humans cannot sleep in.
Tammy died three years ago. It died of a sickness close to cancer. We knew
that it was sick because it did not move at all for three days. So we called a doctor, and he discovered
that Tammy was sick of something that cannot be cured, and the sickness would keep getting stronger
until she died. The doctor suggested killing Tammy instead of making her suffer to death, and we
agreed. We paid him money to kill her with a needle filled with poison that kills it instantly. The decision was
very sad. My mom, big sister, and baby sister cried; the boys did not.
Tammy was fun to meet though. The whole family still misses it. And because of that, we
decided not to get anymore pets.

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Every day at four o’clock my seasoned neighbor wrenches open his weathered wooden front door followed by the sound of a very squeaky screened second one, only opening them far enough to squeeze his frail body through. Hobbling, he crosses the splintered porch in his open toed sandals and sits on a wicker rocking bench in the soft shade of a looming willow tree. A book is usually strewn lazily across his creased khakis and he gently leaves through it till sunlight gives way moonlight. The days he doesn’t bring a book would be wasted tugging at his wiry white beard and staring into the blue and yellows of the falling sun.
Sometimes when the weather is right he watches children scamper in the streets attempting to fly colorful kites. I observe him though my little square window in my room and I often think about how sad he looks. He is far past his prime and is now speedily souring. I think of all the time consumed just sitting about while life and youth frolic in his face. Overwhelming sadness swallows me whole and, tears trickle down my violently red cheeks wetting the pillows. Hair begins to stick to my face. Every day at four o’clock I lie unable to move and watch my seasoned neighbor.

of them, even before we met it. It also likes sleeping in places like small spaced areas, places that
humans cannot sleep in.
years ago. It wasn’t her choice. It died
that it was sick because it did not move at all for three days. So we called a doctor, and he discovered
that Tammy was sick of something that cannot be cured, and the sickness would keep getting stronger
until she died. The doctor suggested killing Tammy instead of making her suffer to death, and we
a needle filled with poison
very sad. My mom, big sister, and baby sister cried; the boys did not.
Tammy was fun to meet though. The whole family still misses it. And because of that, we

Tammy
Tammy is my pet cat. It is a female. It is very special. It is snowy white with a few grey spots with
stripes all over and one on its head. Its eyes are lime-green, dazzling in the day and glowing at night. It
walks with pride everywhere because of who she is. It always begs to go and play outside. We usually let
it because it knows how to come back.
Tammy hates all types of food except for cat food. It even hates beef and chicken. It hates my
baby sister. But it is obvious that she hates her because of jealousy. It used to hit my sister without
anyone looking. But my sister once hit her back and it stopped hitting her or anyone else ever since. No
cat likes being pulled by the tail, and if anyone does that to Tammy, it would turn mad.
Tammy likes sleeping in front of the house. And when we open the door, we see it coming
straight back in. It likes sitting on our laps while we are watching TV. It likes people. It was never afraid
of them, even before we met it. It also likes sleeping in places like small spaced areas, places that
humans cannot sleep in.
Tammy died three years ago. It wasn’t her choice. It died of a sickness close to cancer. We knew
that it was sick because it did not move at all for three days. So we called a doctor, and he discovered
that Tammy was sick of something that cannot be cured, and the sickness would keep getting stronger
until she died. The doctor suggested killing Tammy instead of making her suffer to death, and we
agreed. We paid him money to kill her with a needle with poison that kills it instantly. The decision was
very sad. My mom, big sister, and baby sister cried; the boys did not.
Tammy was fun to meet though. The whole family still misses it. And because of that, we
decided not to get anymore pets.